Confirmation[week 8]

1. What is my thesis?
As the Internet have commercialized in global era, the pros and cons of the Internet have rised.
2. What types of source am I defend my thesis?

1. Data spills 2. Information not appropriate to the age 3. Internet addiction

3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?

First, we can communicate easily with any other people using the Internet. Thanks to the Internet the Earth became gigantic village so called global village. We can communicate people who live in any part of the globe within a blink of an eye. It is extremely fast and efficient contrast to former one. Furthermore thanks to the development of the Internet and smart phone, the SNS(Social Network System) developed geometrically. According to the statistics of the NSO(National Statistical Office) 81.2% of the teenagers have accounts for SNS. By using the SNS, people can communicate with their friends or strangers immediately whenever they want to communicate. They can check responses and comments in real time. Also this communication is not limited to the country. We can keep in touch with foreigners even strangers by using Internet.

Second, there are much informations in the Internet. Internet is an endless storehouse of information. Any kind of information, on any topic under the sun is available on the internet. Some of the prominent search engines such as, Google, Yahoo, etc are making this information easily accessible to its seekers. The information available on the net is so vast that, even in academics the use of the internet has now become inevitable. All of students may have the experience that they copy or find informations on the Internet. It is not only easy to access to good quality of informations but also there are endless information on the Internet.

Third, with the internet, a new economic system has evolved, known as the e-commerce marketplace. The new economic concept involves exchange of goods and other services throughout the globe, over the internet. As we just click some products they will be delivered at our doorstep. We can compare prices on the Internet and can consider constantly until we decide without study clerk's face. Also we can buy everything that we want to buy. From clothes or cosmetics to books or foods. It is good for contemporary men who don't have much time to go shopping such as working mom or students. Furthermore sometimes many products are cheaper in online than off line. Also people can accumulate points of the shopping malls. There are many benefits of online shopping.